Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree?
The phenomenon has aroused wide concern over the issue of climate alteration. Many human kinds think that adjusting to this problem is appropriate rather than preventing climate change. In my aspects of illustration, without measures against this problem, the consequences will be disastrous. Tackling this issue or whether finding way to live with it will be discussed below before a reasonable conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, citizens and government should take some measures against climate change. Because this alteration could result the potential for human suffering from huge disasters, whereas, it is hard for individuals to continue living with this issue. Besides impacting negatively the human life style, diseases and famine are outbreak. For instance, in some countries the consequences of climate change cost homelessness and poverty even the lives of people. Therefore, this tendency should be prevented, or at least mitigated.
However, living with climate change is much more beneficial than prevention due to some reasons. First, in terms of economy, it requires vast amount of money to invest researches on climate change problem, so solution to the issue costs much. Second, some time is needed in order to decide on measures accurately. Third, these methods demands volunteers. Thus, evidences above disapprove prevention of this phenomenon.
In conclusion, the attempts to overcome this aspect or try to continue living with it are the question of globe. Hence, it is recommended to concentrate on roots of the issue before the following catastrophes which are considered extremely threatening will occur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, whereas, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5577689243 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8847372808 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0851175002 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203598797606 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642143780461 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592086175279 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117613571698 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433335157956 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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