Some people think that intelligence is innate while other think that we can improve our knowledge through learning . Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...intelligence can be improved by learning .However, other say that knowledge improv...
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...telligence can be improved by learning .However, other say that knowledge improvement i...
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...y that knowledge improvement is natural.I will delve my both the views in upcomin...
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... There are various aspects of increase the knowledge by learing. Firstly, a per...
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...gs a person can also improve the skills.He or she can compete their competitior in...
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...ete their competitior in various fields.For example, if he or she following interne...
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...g internet or from learning organization , and also have the ability then they can...
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...and we can improve the sense by learing.It basically depends upon the mind presenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06790123457 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66493633249 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.5058686224 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198046849668 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932674108802 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642355845371 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122210105877 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676151780401 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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