Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our knowledge through learning, discuss both sides and give opinion.
It is said that "intelligence is the ability to do the work effectively". With the steady growth in modernization the lifestyle of people have been greatly effected. They have achieved various milestone. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that is that the intelligence is innate or improve through knowledge? Through this essay i shall explore the dimensions of the topis through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are a group of people believe that the intelligence is innate. They strengthen their view point by clamming that some people have power to do any specific work effectively without the practice of that work. Apart from this the people not learn that work but they have all knowledge regards that. Moving forward, like in movie of haritik Roshan in jaddu movie they have the innate intelligency to do the work relate to species. A good illustration here is in India according to survey 50% having the innate intelligency to perform the activities.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people believe that the knowledge improve through learning. This is very important point of this essay. It states that the person do a better with help of knowledge. If they learn any concept they definitely expert on that concept. As well as the knowledge level is also increased of that person. Learning is very important in life because if we learn something then we knew something. It had great impact on their life. For example here is the survey conducted by government of india 70% people are learned and achieve their goals on his life such as: mark zackerburger, ambani, tata, and so on.
We have seen that there are number of answers of this question. However, i tend to believe that its vary about person to person. Some of the people having innate intelligence but on the other hand, some are do hardwork and learning for getting the success in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90697674419 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76521798471 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3363534014 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205332696201 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607455210422 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634918783675 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134078705127 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253088936389 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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