Some people think that intelligence is innate while some think that we can improve our knowledge through learning.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Intelligence is the ability to reason.It is the collection of information.wheath...
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...ogress their awareness through practice.However,I will describe both sides of perspecti...
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...their awareness through practice.However,I will describe both sides of perspective...
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...comming pharagraphs. To commence with,there are various views about knowledge.First...
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...there are various views about knowledge.First of all,people can learn everything with...
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...rious views about knowledge.First of all,people can learn everything with the help of t...
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...uire lot of experience from their study.Moreover,persons can become more talented during...
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... of experience from their study.Moreover,persons can become more talented during the cla...
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...become more talented during the classis.The practice is very important for all huma...
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...lso it will be helpful for their career.In adition to,the public bodies can gain s...
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...e helpful for their career.In adition to,the public bodies can gain sufficient educa...
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...human beings are to be capable by birth who are give much information from their older ...
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...information from their older or parents.Like most of communities are prefer to their...
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...mation from their older or parents.Like most of communities are prefer to their family occupation b...
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...or parents.Like most of communities are prefer to their family occupation because they...
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...ily occupation because they have already expert in that field. Therefore they hav...
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...hey have already expert in that field. Therefore they have do not need for training.For ...
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...pert in that field. Therefore they have do not need for training.For instance,the ...
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...fore they have do not need for training.For instance,the gitazz bindrkahiya has fol...
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...ve do not need for training.For instance,the gitazz bindrkahiya has followed his fat...
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...rkahiya has followed his father passion.His father was very famous reowned punjabi ...
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...wned punjabi singer as well as apple of ones eye. In my opinion,the learning stag...
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...l as apple of ones eye. In my opinion,the learning stage plays vital.role in ever...
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...s vital.role in every person life.people should teach good habit to their childr...
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...role in every person life.people should teach good habit to their children in th...
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...abit to their children in the childhood.Which assist to improve their capacity and ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71291866029 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42744075171 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712918660287 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.7053241839 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.8 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.8 20.7667163134 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104436218057 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523941900307 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312331008922 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0610545204892 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223606920595 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.73 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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