It is claimed that announcing devoid of car day internationally is viable approach to reduce our carbon footprint whereas majority of people consider that there are ample steps to curb this issue. I totall agree with both of the views.
At the current time our global atmosphere is being contaminated by a number of factors.This problem is posing a threat to the existence of humanity.Due to this reason taking an action is urgent in order to alleviate people's fear.To accomplish this goal declaring car free day seems to have satisfactory results as if people are urged not to utilize from their cars, that day no carbon emisson will be emited into the atmosphere After realizing how much benefit they can do They are inspired to contribute their help to tackle this burning issue.
However only one day doesn't seem to make a marked improvment in terms of adressing this issue and it is considered to be very minor step.
To my mind there are a number of methods which are viable to have a positive consequences. To illustrate inventing groundbreaking invention such as solar cars can be the best option as cars account for more than half of the carbon emission.Furthermore legistlating a new rule that compels people to sow tree seeds every year as much as possible proven to be efficient
Because trees are the source of air purification.By doing these things people can reach their target.
To sum up with the only car free day is somewat difficult to reach our objective and devising a new ways can assist us to meet our potential
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8007518797 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88183091169 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.941392625 49.4020404114 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.428571429 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130915461424 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573050481183 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365827119166 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0661582299803 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335042326471 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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