Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.
People have divided opinions on the benefits of the internet, as some believe the availability of the internet has brought the world closer, while certain group of people argue the opposite. There is no line dividing right or wrong here, as I believe these issues hold true depending upon the circumstances they are viewed upon, which are been described in the impending paragraphs.
Internet is the driving factor for the developement in modern communication technology, as the presence of internet have alowed people living in seperate corners of the world to send their messages in matter of seconds. Nowadays, various means, as like video chats, instant message and voice calls, can be utilized to connect with anyone around the world, which is contributed solely by the internet. Moreover, people nowdays can learn any new skill, and have their queries answers in a matter of seconds, which would have taken a mater of days or even months in we go back a few decades.
On the other hand, internet though has made people across the globe nearer, it has brought lapse of communication with the ones around us. Higher dependence of people on the internet has brought a decine in communication in-person. Studies show that more that 80% of peole refer to the internet for consulation, rather than seeking personal advice from a person they know, leading to people having lesser interaction with others in-person. Furthermore, serious issues including lack of confidenced, anti-social personality disorders, increase anxiety, et cetera have been increasingly seen in the young people generally attributed with by addiction to the internet, which exemplifies the negative aspects brough in communication.
Summing things up, the internet in some ways has bridge tha gap in between the world by bringing an ease to communiction, yet greater reliance to it has made people less socialble hampering their in-person interaction. Though a plethora of issues have risen, In my opinion the posetives brought by through the internet can not be glossed over, as there is no doubt for the role played by the internet in bringing people closer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding ones'?
Suggestion: the surrounding ones
...has brought lapse of communication with the ones around us. Higher dependence of people on the int...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, et cetera have been increasingly seen in the young people generally attributed...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
...nternet, which exemplifies the negative aspects brough in communication. Summing thing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, while, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17341040462 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80254439221 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589595375723 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.265384045 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.727272727 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4545454545 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268043397491 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123260721514 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911120157187 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172959362159 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456323371029 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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