Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think people and community are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that people are more forward in today's world due to the accessibility of internet. Some people believe that individual are more adjacent to one another. Whereas another group is skeptic towards them and feel that increasing of loneliness arise in people and society because of internet. This essay will first discuss the two lines of argument and conclude with an opinion at the end.
On the one hand, people think that internet is one of the effective and easy way to communicate with one person to another and place to place. Nowadays most people have their own technical devices which makes them easy to use Internet. For example, people can share ideas and problem with the person by the support of messages, voice call and phone call. Because of Internet, students can learn many information and can get more knowledge. Further more, people can get all news immediately in Internet.
On the other hand, it is also argued that people are using internet for negative purpose. In this period most of the people are more busy in their mobile phone. For example, Internet creat more distance in family members because individual seems more addicted in using Internet, watching videos, play games and chatting with online friends. Likewise, society's people seems strength to each other because every individual don't have interested to communicate. So that, people and society are not behaving friendly and they are more active in their fake life.
In conclusion, there are evidence to suggest that some of positive things in using of internet help people to be closer. But overall, it is clear that most of the people are misusing Internet in today's generation. Nevertheless, I feel using Internet should be limited because people and community are becoming more isolated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...Because of Internet, students can learn many information and can get more knowledge....
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...Because of Internet, students can learn many information and can get more knowledge. Further mor...
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Line 5, column 422, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to each other because every individual dont have interested to communicate. So that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, whereas, for example, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08783783784 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49977172077 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4138959132 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5882352941 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384242628065 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13851472869 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564414627614 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251322894698 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041160238574 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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