Some people think that it is best to encourage children to leave their family home as soon as possible.others believe children should stay at home for as long as they like . Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Family tradition varies country to country and probably in some developed countries people buoy their offsprings to live a self-reliant life.in actual,some people are in the favour of this trend and other argued by saying that this is not a proactive option to raise children.this essay intends to unpack both favoured and refused views of such wind,in subsequent paragraphs.
The vogue of living independently enters with some fair field.The first and most obvious is that living by themselves enable children not to rely on their parents for everything from soup to nuts. To be specific children become self dependent while living alone,as they have to manage their living expenses,food bills and other charges,also they considerably have to do their work solely. Therefore,they start earning money in the early age to carry off their outlays. In developed countries,for example,people are more independent as compared to the citizens of developing countries.
A plethora of points can be put down to shed light on the denied statement. Initially,the decision to live separately may lack the children towards kinship culture.In particular,children,who leave their home in early age create deficiency of seeking family ethics such as greeting someone and other social etiquettes,also family ties get loosened.As a consequence,children not only miss the opportunity to live in golden period but also will not become a bule-blooded person.Moreover,leaving home in young age,permit children to indulge im anti-social activities, as these kind of offsprings find themselves in a permissive atmosphere,where they can do whatever they want. Hence children are affected adversely by this swing,as they may participate in bad peer group who are counted as criminals,in actual.
By amalgamating the delebrations,it is a matchless objective to stay alone by leaving family,but it is still believed by me the children should be up brought in family atmosphere upto the last year of teenage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in particular, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54605263158 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56886520097 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.59483279 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 187.333333333 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7777777778 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267126173666 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919174365119 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545577414982 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148662023372 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259789914827 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 13.0946893788 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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