From my point of view, I partly agree with living in the countriside is that brings for people a lot of benifits than in the city.
On the one hand, there are the number of reason why is better to live in the countryside than in the city. The first reason, the people live in the countryside reduce rate of getting of diseases.
The main reason cause respiratory disease is polluted environment from emissions. To specific, the rural's environment is cleaner than the city, for there are many trees and have few vehicle. Thus an amount of CO2 are released by the vehicle is that go down significantly. In addiction, people spend more time taking care themself. In the big city, people are facing with traffic jam during many hours even they spend several hours going short distance about 3-4km. While others live in rural area who do not meet similar to problem.
On the other hand, In the rural are, education environment is as not good as in the city. For example if people live in the countryside, people have to take their child to school that is famous in area, this school fees is more expensive than normal school. There is few the family can pay all of school fees. The child begin to study new languages that has also quitely inconvinent isues. For instance, the children need have environment to practical speaking and listening skills which is vital skills in process of studying languages.
To sum up, I approve to that the countryside is better to live than in the city. However this problem exits on serval of disadvantage but there are many the ways of solution to improve life in the countryside.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple a lot of benifits than in the city. On the one hand, there are the number of...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun vehicle seems to be countable; consider using: 'few vehicles'.
Suggestion: few vehicles
...city, for there are many trees and have few vehicle. Thus an amount of CO2 are released by ...
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Line 4, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...re are many trees and have few vehicle. Thus an amount of CO2 are released by the ve...
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Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hours going short distance about 3-4km. While others live in rural area who do not me...
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Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ide is better to live than in the city. However this problem exits on serval of disadva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67132867133 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50120025958 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552447552448 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2955105239 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230518387008 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718753028833 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784381247844 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150753708898 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618513656721 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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