Every company has protocol for distributing salary as per the position, experience and job description. However, many people often argued that have had a high salary for experienced person of managerial role would be a better decision in contrast to other workers. In this essay agree with the statement because, getting high salary makes up manager to work hard and establish innovative management programs, and most significantly to teach and support for new employees by the long term experience in an organization.
To begin with, manage a company might be a stringent role of manager in each company. So as to year by experience of senior person could have an opportunity to deteriorate problem inside the company, among employees, staff allotment and progress of the marketing or overall enhancement of an organization. To cope up with arising situation of the company and lead with high technology also a challenge of every manager compared to his colleagues under the position. Thereby to encourage such people by increment and supports would have been benefit for the institution and the outcome of achievements. For instance, select experienced senior managers among the workers in leading company in Singapore has doubled the profit and position among other companies by increment obtained for managers.
Likewise, co ordinate employees with different character, working styles, abilities also a revenge to managers. Other workers like newly graduate trainees, new employees, have a plethora of mistakes and doubts for minimum years according to the job of a person. Such circumstances, giving salary equal to the highly efficient employee would make a conflict among workers and sometimes failure to do things effectively by seniors. Provide salary as per the role of work and job description would emphasize the crystal clear evidence of a companies development and progress to the core. For example, reputed company reduce the salary of senior members to other common workers as part of a survey results that the accountability of profit fell down dramatically.
To sum up, giving salary in order to role, position, and works of person like manager under stress who is efficient to get high monthly income rather than other workers who is work together and comparatively low level tension and works.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...ingent role of manager in each company. So as to year by experience of senior person cou...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...phasize the crystal clear evidence of a companies development and progress to the core. F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, as to, for example, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1955.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92021217014 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538043478261 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0569021592 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.642857143 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331027007932 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111438755007 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517097841174 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199282524403 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497938831432 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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