A group of people believe it is worth spending spare time for mind-training activities, for instance, reading books to accumulate essential knowledge or play word puzzles with friends or family to generate logical thoughts. Conversely, others consider free time as the inevitable duration that should be utilised for relaxing and releasing stress or negativity from work or study. In my opinion, I suppose that people had better use their leisure time for the activities that they are passionate about doing.
On the one side, it is important for some people to use free time valuably for activities that benefit their minds. That said free time should not be wasted on unwinding but should be the mind's training period that differentiates them from the lethargic ones who always squander their time involving in amusement worthless activities. Besides, these people also appreciate every precious second of their life that they want to spend time properly and profitably by doing things that enhance their minds' strength as well as extending their knowledge.
On the other side, other people reckon that leisure time is for leisure activities which helps to refresh the mind and to recharge the body. It is understandable because a plethora of studies have shown that relaxing plays an essential role in human's health. Without leisure activities, we could be drowned in stress and anxiety from schools and workplaces that deteriorate our minds and exhaust our bodies. By contrast, doing things that we are fascinated about in our free time might immediately boost our mood, therefore stress and fatigue can be attenuated, which is better for our brains compared to reading and competing all day long.
In conclusion, a number of people find it vital to completely and precisely utilise spare time to upgrade the mind. However, others argue that it is much better for any individual to have time to engage in activities that they desire to do. Personally, I totally agree that in such a busy life, we should spend our little relaxing period to live freely enthusiastically.
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- Many believe that individuals can do little to improve the environment Only governments and large companies can make a real difference To what extent do you agree or disagree 95
- Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people Discuss the advantages and disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from yo 73
- Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees while others have free entry Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or ex 61
- Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, however, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12684365782 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72915086793 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551622418879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0286351147 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347936254422 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132136503789 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843785391745 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217800528283 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410723682267 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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