Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as
reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people have extra time to spend on free time activities. A section of society thinks that this time should be used to do exercises to work on our brains, but others argue that if you should spend this free time resting gives some rest to the brain and decreasing decreases pressure on your body. I personally believe that both are important in improving the quality of our lives. In the course of the essay, I will describe both viewpoints explain my opinion.
On the one hand, it is important to utilise that time to increase the power of the mind. Our brain uses past experiences that help us to make decisions in business or work. For example, when a child is born he/she does not know anything but just experiences their surroundings, learns will be able to speak and also able to run. Our brain is continuously learning throughout the life cycle. To improve brains efficiency we need to exercise like we do regarding our body fitness. Due to these facts, a human should use their leisure time on such activities.
On the other hand, the brain needs rest to repair its system. Our head works the whole day without any break and ensures the body runs smoothly. If we do not give it time to do rest, then we will die earlier. For instance, if a machine produces products without maintenance, then it breaks down. Similarly, our brain does a lot of things and if we do not give it time to rest its cells, then we cannot make the right decisions.
In conclusion, our mind needs to exercise to improve its skills, but rest is necessary to continue working properly and so both are important to ensure the brain works in the right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...e the power of the mind. Our brain uses past experiences that help us to make decisions in busin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56565656566 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4782288438 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8389812931 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281776109581 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899538308663 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067911321984 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170064279766 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631558443172 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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