Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activity that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It's important to have enough free time, to develop the social life, take a break from the work or from the study and, maybe, to develop new skills and to maintain the mind active. Some people prefer to simply rest, others are more active during their leisure time. In my opinion, although there are some benefits of relaxing activities, is far better to improve the mind rather than simply doing nothing, because it can boost the overall quality of life, reducing the stress.
The typical workplace is an extremely fast-paced place, where the employees are constantly under pressure: usually they have to deal with strict deadlines, impolite bosses or colleagues and poor salaries. This lifestyle is undoubtedly unhealthy, both for the body and the mind, so it's perfectly fine to take a break from this life, slow down the rhythm and simply enjoy the our empty moments.
On the other hand, others believe that to not use well our free time is a waste of time. Time is too precious to be wasted, and we should use it for activities that can elevate us in some way, such as reading, playing chess, or practice sports. This is an active way to spend the leisure, in which people not only relax, but actively learn something new and develop new skills.
To conclude, I strongly support the active way to spend the free time because, if people can maintain active their mind, this gain them a long life sense of self improvement. If people learn something and they are active, surely they will be less stressed even during the work time, because they will have the sense to obtain something from their free time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76595744681 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26768821458 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2919614111 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.4 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306369816697 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125581458851 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862659292417 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175649310393 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862982930532 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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