Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people thinuk that taking part in individual Sports like Tennis Or swimming is better .discuss both view and give your opinion
In recent decades, there has been an argument whether engaging in team sports or individual sport are more beneficial. Personally, I firmly believe that both types of sport have their own distinctive advantages.
It is undeniable the massive benefits of team sports bring to people who partake in these.Firstly, fighting for a common goal with a group of players may teach them how to build teamwork and camaraderie due to shared similar interests and goals. Especially, communication is vital to create strong team spirit and combine each skills of member smoothly. Secondly, people in the team have higher levels of social support from teammates.For instance, they are prone to learn how to play and receive encouragement from their co-players, which help them to be motivated to participate in sports. In terms of well-being, maybe team sports are much more entertaining compared to individual ones.
On the other hand, solo sports like tennis or swimming are almost as good as team sports and many of us benefit from valuable skills. People will gain more confidence and independence because they have to go through by themselves and not rely on someone else’ skills. Moreover, individual sports prevent them from effects from results or performances or time arrangement of their teammates. For example, many youngsters choose to engage in sports on their own like cycling rather than being part of a team, this is because they are reluctant to depend on other people.
In a nutshell, I believe each type of sport has its own impact on people. Despite different advantages, they still bring players a healthy lifestyle and play an indispensable role in our life.
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people thinuk that taking part in individual Sports like Tennis Or swimming is better discuss both view and give your opinion 78
- Topic Scientists predict in the near future cars will be driven by computers not people Why Do you think it is a positive or negative development 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17582417582 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85365147814 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611721611722 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3160799585 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26317847963 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945946602542 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592391845206 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150299813085 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668670427181 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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