Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more house. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the 21st century, the lifestyle of people has undergone drastic changes and most of the individuals migrate into cities for getting plenty of facilities; however it is considered by many masses that trees should be planted more in the desolate areas in the towns or cities instead of constructing houses. I am largely agree with this notion due to several reasons which will be articulated in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with reasons why manufacturing of accommodation is necessary in the urban areas? Because of increment in population. In other words, in this competitive era, finding a job is a biggest obstacle in the whole world due to lack of employment. People are shifting in urban areas because of job opportunities because urban areas are facilitated with the industries or companies that is why more apartments are being built to provide shelter to them. For instance, the recent overhaul carried out by educational department showcased that at least 70% students prefer cities to get higher education so they need accommodation there. To ramification, constructing houses in urban areas is beneficial to provide homes to both workers and learners.
However, there are bountiful points which prove that planting tree or more important in deserted spaces in towns. First and the foremost is that safe humanbeing’s life. To explicate it, the rate of pollution is being inclined rapidly due to many reasons but major one is over consumption of vehicles such means of transport emit emissions which are cause of air deteriorates owing to this human beings have to face difficulty regarding inhalation it is illustrated by specialist doctors of United State. Therefore, the priority goes to plantation of more and more trees in cities.
Further more, despite aforementioned benefit trees also provide habitat to animals. It is true that creatures are at the verge of extinction because of deforestation since many years. Moreover, if trees would be grown then it will be worthwhile to protect them. Apart from this, some plants also play a vital role in medical sector like 'Neem’ which is used by physicians to make painkillers. As a result, trees are not only beneficial for human beings but also provide habitat to creatures.
In conclusion, although having apartments in towns is necessary , yet trees are more important in open areas because it is beneficial to purified the environment and also worthwhile for living things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, apart from, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23484848485 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9628013097 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570707070707 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.356536445 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237874201757 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704474402114 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736973454554 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139918093203 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040873612253 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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