Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illnesses, rather than funding the treatment for people who are already ill.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it can be said that investing in improving the quality of health, and preventing diseases are more important than investing in inpatient care. In my opinion, I disagree with this opinion, I write to present a few reasons why it is important to invest in patient care and this is important.
Above all, the benefits of investing in inpatient care. First, when research and treatment are successful, doctors and experts know the cause of diseases, how to treat them, and how to prevent them. For example, now that the globe is affected by the COVID-19 pandemic, the number of people infected with the virus CORONA is constantly increasing, and medical professionals, doctors who test sick people, conduct research on this new disease, and cure people, after they research the disease, they know how it spreads and publicly informs the people about the measures to prevent the disease. And so, knowing the causes of disease is the motivation for people to improve their lives and choose healthy lifestyles. Second, the cure is the best way to improve the quality of life because the living environment has a direct influence on human health, and health is the most important thing for people, so it is an important factor. importance of quality of life. Nowadays, the likelihood of respiratory diseases is increasing every year due to the heavily polluted living environment and air. And so, people are trying to improve the living environment by protecting the environment, investing in air purifiers, eco-friendly products, and medicines for respiratory diseases that lead to a high quality of life is improved.
On the other hand, investing and developing a healthy lifestyle is need paying attention to. If the living environment of people is not interested to improve and develop, it becomes the cause of strange diseases and threatens human health. The fact when people always live in a polluted environment, eat dirty foods each day, and do not improve leads to strange diseases, digestive and respiratory diseases, and other diseases.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-06-20 | trikhung777 | 73 | view |
| 2021-07-05 | melanine | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it can be said that investing in improving...
^^
Line 6, column 930, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Importance
...r people, so it is an important factor. importance of quality of life. Nowadays, the likel...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17964071856 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8106613336 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508982035928 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.9377795598 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.076923077 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154012996813 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055127582143 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317116421193 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993818287851 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208603118456 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.