In contemporary society, a multitude of people are overwhelmingly busy with career progression and the pursuit of inspirational triumphs, as a result, people ignore the importance of healthy and balanced lifestyles served as to a prominent role in the pathway to achieving success. Personally, I absolutely agree with the idea of state subsidies for raising awareness of health issue to prevent afflictions than for medical treatments to patients
On the one hand, the prevention of illness is more likely to be beneficial and effective for people. From my personal sentiment, If people do not do moderate and regular exercises as well as have dietary balance, they can meet some health issues. To be specific, many children have a penchant for eating food obtaining a high level of sugar then it accumulated gradually in their body that could lead to high blood pressure or diabetes, besides, the busy works of people such businessmen, engineers or also students render them have no relaxing and free time to play sports or do exercises. Consequently, they become overweight and also be in peril of facing diseases. This means that awareness of the importance of healthy lifestyles could not only keep people fit and mitigate the risk of diseases in order to improve and prolong the span of their life.
On the other hand, I am firmly convinced that it is pointless to cure for patients in terminal life. For instance, when patients face malignant cancer or non-curable diseases and more medications or medical treatments in attempts to prolong their life that is useless and expensive as they will pay much money on drugs and undergoing operations with a purpose of saving themselves, however, their expectations are not paid off. Thus, municipal and national governments should not expend much money on promoting the cure for afflictions.
In conclusion, it may seem to me that people should be aware of the essence of healthy lifestyles together with municipal and national governments should allocate the money on building up sports centres and encouraging people to do regular exercises and maintain a nutritional diet to nurture both mental and physical states.
- Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. 78
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 95
- The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 43
- Some people think that a huge a mount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals, and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15297450425 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92467914892 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563739376771 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.5982251362 49.4020404114 200% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.9 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258654894146 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090278275231 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545003632895 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144282853495 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426755283654 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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