Some people think it is necessary for students to wear uniform while others believe students should not be made to wear a school uniform. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform for students.
different schools have different rules to control their students. some schools compel their students to wear uniform, others let their students wear whatever they want. Although there is an opinion that students should be given freedom in wearing their favorite clothes, I believe that it’s better to let students wear uniform at school.
In general, there are three strong cases to be made in favor of students wearing uniforms to school. First of all, uniform promote the sense of equality among students, erase the gap between genders or social status. The clothes we wear often reflect our financial situation, and this is true for students as well. If the school is not compulsory, students whose parents are rich usually wear fashionable and expensive clothes, while students in the opposite situation can only own a very old and cheap closet. The difference in clothes will make they feel different and this difference should not exist in schools. On the other hand, when all students wear the same, they will feel that they are the same as each other.
Secondly, there are many unique styles of uniforms that will become the school's symbol with the school's logo, and become the pride when wearing the school uniform. To illustrate this, let us take the example of Vietnam Airlines. they also wear blue long dress with a yellow lotus logo on it as their uniform and the same is true of school. Last but not least, uniform is always considered one of the best way to strengthen sense of discipline and solidarity.
On the other hand, the downside of wearing a school uniform should not be overlooked. In particular, fashion has a positive effect on the mood of students such as keeping them motivated and cheerful, some creative environments such as Google or Facebook do not apply strict rules about wearing clothes for their employees. Moreover, cheap and low-quality clothing material can be uncomfortable and not suitable for all weather conditions.
On balance, though there are significant disadvantages, from my point of view the benefits that school uniforms bring to students outweigh the cons. Conclusion, uniforms can make students more obedient, give students a sense of equality, and give teachers more control over students. Those are the reasons why I believe students should wear school uniforms. also, schools should require students to wear uniforms on certain days of the week.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in general, in particular, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10353535354 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53232721108 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1711419817 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.05 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.574791427837 0.244688304435 235% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197079053079 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134798913051 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352573960094 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784348791686 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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