Some people think it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because the information can be seen on TV and on the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion
Nowadays some people think that it is needed to travel to a foreign country to gain knowledge of that country, but others reckon that the optimal method is accumulating understandings through TV and the internet. from my perspective, I wholeheartedly believe that utilizing technological devices is one of the most effective ways to find learning materials.
Firstly, Traveling to another country in the world is considered an obstacle for people and students especially financial ability. people have to spend a lot of money visiting foreign countries such as tickets, renting accommodation fees or incurred expenses for that trip. this could be seen as an intriguing experience but expenditure per trip is a financial burden. secondly, I believe that the information gained from another country via traveling is limited by many things. people could not learn about culture, costume, and cuisine, or all aspects of that nation, because it could waste a huge amount of time and expend to discover. Furthermore, visitors have to be equipped with some basic knowledge about that country to avoid troubles, for instance, people want to travel to India so travelers have to comprehend that beef is banned there because the cow is a symbol of Indian belief.
Using TV and the Internet is deemed as an optimum way to gain understanding from nations in the world albeit it merely purveys learner theoretical knowledge and images. on the one hand, a great advantage is an affordable price. Participants only need an internet-connected gadget namely a smartphone or laptop or just a TV. learners could have opportunities to approach another civilization in the world via a screen. thank to technological breakthroughs, joiners have enough ability to acquire knowledge from other lands in a short time with a friendly budget cost. On the other hand, this avenue makes people become more proactive in the learning process because people could study everywhere instead of depending on the place where they visit.
in conclusion, paying a visit to another country is a good measure but I completely agree that studying via the technological device brings a variety of merit to individuals even during covid 19 pandemic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23876404494 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02999538762 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7036706977 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218397857293 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677841179969 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620439817862 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122650442217 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719240201767 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.