Some people think it’s fine for professional sportsmen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Sports play an influential role in our society by motivating individuals directly as well as indirectly. Some people opine that it is fair for sportsmen to misbehave on or off the field if he is consistently performing while others oppose this. I think it’s unacceptable for a player to breach the discipline even if they are playing well and this essay will discuss the same.
Overall, sportsmen act as a role model for certain people and they inherit various moral values from players. But, there are players who misconduct themselves which sets a wrong example for the society and might lead to inheritance of false values. Nevertheless, certain individuals still consider such act worthy until the player is in good form and performs individually irrespective of the team performance. This might lead to disruption of team’s healthy environment and might create a sense individualism amongst players because of the fact that people support the player and not a team. Nevertheless, the performance of team matters because it is necessary to play well if players need to maintain their mental stress. So, if a single player carries the responsibility of a whole team for a prolonged period it might affect the player mentally and may lead to aggressive and inappropriate behavior. Such arrogant behavior of a single player may lead to downfall of the whole team if not controlled timely.
Moreover, even off the field performance of a player is considered as it equally plays a determinant role in success and influencing people. A player needs to maintain his prestige in front of media as media is a powerful source of promoting themselves as well their good deeds. However, the same media can prove to be crucial factor in destroying their career in the light of fact that media business is based on TRP and they consider promoting what’s beneficial for them rather than player. For example, if a player organizes food camps for indigents a positive impact is created on society but on small scale as it wasn’t highlighted by media but if the same player behaves arrogantly and is egoistic the negative impact is quickly created due to its highlight in media.
In conclusion, although if a sports person is performing well and scaling new heights it is necessary for him to maintain discipline in his life in order to influence the people and the team and also to maintain his respect for his off field integrity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97549019608 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86826288008 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504901960784 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2091137722 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.333333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17839870096 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727089578002 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067261666923 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14044119838 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883414152574 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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