Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers, do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the modern era, it’s argued that moving the factors and industrial companies outside the residential spaces is better. Building the factors of corporates has a huge impact positively impact in our lives. In this essay I will first discuss the health benefits as one of the main advantage of this, and secondly outline the high cost of that as one of the main disadvantage.
Removing the companies out of the major cities can make us healthier. Because corporates can produce lots of pollution spread in the environment which effect negatively our bodies by many diseases. For example a study from London university shown that there is a strong link between lung cancer and the distance between inhabitants and industrial regions. All that can citizens richer cause healthier we are ,More productive we became.
The main disadvantage associated with replacing big firms away from where people normally live can increase the cost of transportation that will effect the quality of life And decline the purchasing power. Ass a result of that people will become less satisfied with their life which can lead to mental health issues. A good illustration for this is that a bank published a survey connected the savings amount between the two types of people, who live away from their work and who lives near.
In conclusion, making new policy for companies regulation to relocate them in the isolated areas has number of benefits such ass better health and high productivity must be weight against the drawbacks such ass expensive transport fees. My personal view is that we must take the companies out of our cities because our health is our most expensive capital.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02527075812 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65664237337 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584837545126 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4106235765 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110741729615 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395342513654 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476795070662 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633017205527 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229938923562 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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