Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.
Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Many argue that relocation of production industry from downtown to rural areas will effect positively to both of them. However, there are advantages and disadvantages of changing the location of the firms. Despite shipping charges, in order to deliver finished products, reduction of air pollution in city centers and employment opportunities are provided.
One of the advantages of developing manufacturing industry in the villages is the increasing number of workplaces. To put in another way, providing the job opportunities to local people allows to improve the quality of their lives, which in turn will rise the cost of living in the country. A classic example of this is Kurchatov where the water power plant was built an most of village dwellers were hired as a blue-collar workers. Consequently, the countryside has been developing and flourishing.
As well as benefits in field of placement, there are no risk for contaminating the atmosphere of metropolises. That is why, if factories move out of the city, the ecosystem will improve. Green house games from factories can be dangerous for respiratory system of city residents, so moving from the municipality is the most optimal solution.
In spite of upper hand which have mentioned before, the lack of transportation in rural areas is still the issue. In other words for delivering the products, companies need to invest their finances to vehicles. In order to supply goods to markets in downtown. An useful example of transport cost is convenience food fabric in Ayagoz. As the cost of shipping is relatively high, the company has to increase the prices, which in turn influence to their profit.
In short, moving of plants from the cities leads to the problems with transportation, but there are several positive aspects, like improving the atmosphere condition in towns and rising the number of jobs in regional areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ustry from downtown to rural areas will effect positively to both of them. However, th...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: improving
...ob opportunities to local people allows to improve the quality of their lives, which in tu...
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Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...v where the water power plant was built an most of village dwellers were hired as ...
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Line 3, column 425, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...ge dwellers were hired as a blue-collar workers. Consequently, the countryside has been...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d to invest their finances to vehicles. In order to supply goods to markets in dow...
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Line 7, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...to supply goods to markets in downtown. An useful example of transport cost is con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, still, well, as to, in short, as well as, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21967213115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00953246799 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4064637324 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11446829253 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333179810954 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281499647931 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569802480096 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147676867716 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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