Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People have many opinions about whether the national budget should be allocated to different aspects of the country. While it is necessary to invest money in outstanding architects, I believe that it is better if the government spent money on education and healthcare programs
On the one hand, pouring money on building the prominent monuments gain a lot of great benefits. Firstly, these spectacular and unique architectures attract millions of tourist annually, which play a significant role in boosting tourism and economics and giving more job opportunities for the unemployed. Furthermore, urban beauty will be more and more striking.
On the other hand, I believe that the government should concentrate mainly on providing such public services such as medical care and ameliorating the quality of education. In my opinion, society will benefit more if people's awareness is raised and health problems can be solved. Besides, if people's intellectual standard was enhanced, it will decrease the social evil and illiteracy rate as well. Moreover, when the government give top priority to medical services development, millions of poor people will have an opportunity to be cured at the public medical centers
To sum up, both sides are necessary for the government to focus on. I personally prefer the shooling and health care aspects should be spent more time and attention
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42396313364 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07656755118 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622119815668 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0021190009 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.777777778 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218925956741 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812566703112 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032178161632 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128301470788 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282806687883 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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