Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There has been a colossal upsurge in discussing about the detrimental effect to people's health stemming from metropolitan city lifestyle. This trend has both pros and cons. In spite of many debatable opinion about this polarizing problem, I personally give a green light to this statement and will scruntinize my rational conclusion in the following essay.
On the one hand, I assume that living in the metropolitan area can bring tremendous negative influence to people' physical and mental health. Firstly, the pollution index coming from air, water, noise,... reaches an alarming rate in both developed and developing city. This can lead to heinous disease such as asthma, illness related to respiratory,.... Secondly, the hustle and bustle in living pace urge the major number of city dwellers have a tendency for consuming fast food and processed meal. It is undoubted that these food are the determining factors make people gain weight, obesity, diabetes,.... Thirdly, due to the hectic workload in the mordenized city, people can't get by the time to communicate or practice the hands-on experience in their daily life. These are the reason force people live in sedentary lifestyle after stressful working hours and deter their physical and psychological health.
On the other hands, there still exist a range of benefits for people' health once they live in the energetic city. To be clear, the updated medical equipment and renowned hospitals are located in the cosmopolitan city. City dwellers who suffer illness don't need to wrap their head in order to search for the qualified medicine and medical service. Moreover, habitants in the city don't need to go a long distance to reach the hospital and their health problem can be tackled as soon as possible. Consequently, there are a range of health centres and entertaining places to serve the resident' health such as spa, gym centre, yoga class,... It is evident that residing in a mordern city is not extremely harmful and noxious to people health.
To recapitulate, two sides associate with everything: one affirmative and one negative points. It all comes down that each individual should raise their awareness about which place is better for their health. I wholehearted agree with the assumption which opine the drawbacks that city lifestyle affect their habitant is outweigh its merits.
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...city lifestyle affect their habitant is outweigh its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22427440633 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75993734107 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604221635884 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5854956408 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23954579217 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674554231051 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632833796623 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130553261865 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573880384123 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.