Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that there are various abilities between males and females in all faces of life. Thus, relating to their weakness and strength, occupational suitability which is based on each gender needs to consider. From my perspective, I extremely disagree with this point of view.
From a gender equality standpoint, both men and women should have the same chances to pursue a career. Firstly, in the past, men and women were forced to work in certain jobs but nowadays everything had changed. For instance, there is a range of work are suitable for both sexes such as business, athletes, and even taking care of family. Secondly, both two genders could have a special capacity to access the same professional opportunities and earn equal incomes. As a result, starting at the workplace and end at the social viewpoint, the discrimination, traditional thoughts will disappear soon and aim to the gender-equal world.
Opponents of jobs depend on the abilities of the two sexes, I highly claim that there is a variety of exceptions. First of all, females completely can have high-level jobs than men not because of their gender. The success of world-class businesswomen and politicians Hillary Clinton is an example and her talent not only can lead a national economy but also changed women's social status. Moreover, the roles of males and females in modern society have altered. To be more specific, men nowadays can have a responsibility for childcare and housework, while women become a breadwinner of their family. It is obvious that changing positions is ordinary and not a big issue and different from old-fashioned thoughts.
To sum up, pursuing careers not rely on whether men or women. I believe that society must create opportunities for people in order to perform their capacities fully instead of based on stereotypes. In the near future, gender will not a factor to inhibit someone in their path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88398457147 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6042789797 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94117647059 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268515150173 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721418012797 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549258643864 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137609093399 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314168342317 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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