Some people think that men and women have good expertive only in particular fields . This means men are better at doing some other job .
Do you agree or disagree?
In modern era ,men and women are equal in all areas of life . Women ,these days ,are becoming more intelligent with education . However, women are doing all works very efficiently . But an argument has been put forward that women and men are experts in different fields . According to me, this statement does not hold a valid ground.
There are a lots of reasons that why men and women are doing well in all types of jobs equally . The first and foremost point is that in this century , women are doing all jobs which had been done by men in the past like navy, police et cetra. Also ,some men ,nowadays , are doing jobs like cooking ,fashion designing which were to be for women only.
Secondly , many social norms had been made by government for the impowerment of women. These norms moulded the personality of men and women . Furthermore, women occupy half of the sky which means that they equally deserve all the rights. Also ,if women are allowed to engage in the productive labour or workforce, they will also contribute to the socio-economic development of country . As a result of this , status of women will increase and hence , social inclusion will develop in country .
In conclusion, i believe that the statement that men and women can do work according to their physical ability or expertive is completely wrong. It is just a hypothetical believe. They both can do work equally and in all particular areas .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78367346939 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5639565864 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2554169986 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297891351192 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101752243922 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069646814666 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189804793534 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698116130487 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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