It can be argued that whether museums should be entertaining or educational. In my opinion, they should combine both educational and entertaining purposes.
For some, the seminal role of museums is to entertain. Because they may be exhausted or want to see interesting objects, people sometimes attend museums. If there were, for example, texts of education to excess, people would not go to museums because they would be bored. Also, authorities can earn money by attracting tourists designing with a way which can involve lots of newcomers. Such as they may have games of history and gifts for victors or spectacles related to their ancestors customs, which are unusual.
For other people,a museum should be able to give lots of data. In other words, they should emphasise education that a person can learn something, which whether or not it is about history. Some museums have their special workers who give information to their visitors; however, others just write the informations. This type of commentaries are very useful, especially for teenagers. A person who a visitor can learn a lot watching real and even interesting objects in a museum if it has. Some people concider that having seen any kind of exhibition, we should have been taught something, such as it maight be about history, culture, etc.
To conclude, I agree with those who hold the idea that museums should be able to attract, at the same time, and be enjoyable
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, for example, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.025 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72629938439 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591666666667 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1112948467 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305500913021 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116898128832 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839267382083 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2067251957 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549800259415 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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