Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of the museum is to educate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Museums are one of the most important establishments in the world. It provides people the opportunity to experience the whole world in a nutshell. While museums can be entertaining, its’ main purpose is to educate people about our world and our history.
Museum is a great educational tool in our modern society. Although we can read books and watch documentaries about different aspects of the world, museum presents a unique experience in front of us unlike others. Museums paves the way to learn about our ancestors, the way they led their lives and how our whole species has evolved over thousands of years to the current form, us. Museum is also important for learning about the vast range of cultures that thrive around the world at present, including our own culture, where we come from. They also provide us with the influential arts that shaped our present. In short, museum is a place to learn, which is its’ main purpose. Museum should be considered as a source to learn about ourselves and the others who comprise our planet.
Some people might argue that museum is a place for entertainment. Museum is entertaining, no one can deny that. But when it comes to its’ main purpose, it is educating people through entertainment. People usually enjoy themselves by learning through museums, but they do not realize it. So this might be a misconception to say that the main purpose of museum is to entertain people.
So to conclude, there is no doubt that the main purpose of museum is to educate people. It seems to entertain people too, but that is not the purpose it intends to serve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in short, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86231884058 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72996126544 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6242309697 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9411764706 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58823529412 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268014368605 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10318427769 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672749552127 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191589673788 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453293773579 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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