It is believed that what people are spending time on media like newspapers or TV channels is such a waste because of no connections. Personally, I partly agree with this statement and the following essay will explain in detail.
On the one hand, newspaper and TV programs could provide the general public with helpful information and knowledges in various aspects in their life. Only by watching a programme or reading a new report would you considerably enrich your knowledges which are considered carefully. For example, through a cooking show, people could learn numerous tips to prepare delicious desserts for your own family and friends. Additionally, you would have more topics to share with your friends, which strenghthens the bonds with each other. Another reason why media is remarkably helpful for us is entertainment. Indeed, nowadays, the number of TV shows is increasing like a recreation for citizen to relax after stressful hours of work or study. For instance, Just For Laughs Gags, a popular comedy festival, is one of the most interesting show for many individuals to enjoy themselves after working longer hours.
On the other hand, People frequently think that the news is unrelated to them because it comes from the outside of their own community or interests. For example, if a person is not interested in entertainment, the newspaper and reports uploaded on the internet or occasionally broadcast on TV are turned out to be meaningless .Hence, the information transferred are likely to pointless to them and could not be applied in daily life.
In conclusion, that news plays a important role in our life is undeniable.It could be significantly meaningful to people or slightly pointless to the others but there is definitely no waste of time in it.
- Some people think news has no connection to people s lives So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree 64
- Some people think news has no connection to people s lives So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people think news has no connection to people s lives So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...paper and TV programs could provide the general public with helpful information and knowledges...
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...s in various aspects in their life. Only by watching a programme or reading a new...
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...for many individuals to enjoy themselves after working longer hours. On the othe...
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Suggestion: .
...t on TV are turned out to be meaningless .Hence, the information transferred are l...
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Suggestion: Hence
...on TV are turned out to be meaningless .Hence, the information transferred are likely...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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...y life. In conclusion, that news plays a important role in our life is undeniabl...
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...mportant role in our life is undeniable.It could be significantly meaningful to pe...
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...icantly meaningful to people or slightly pointless to the others but there is def...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10996563574 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97297138006 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5628591942 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.916666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175274146937 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062736168983 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672079519184 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123270921883 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478198485957 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.