Some people think that the news media nowdays have influenced people's live in negative ways
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world news media play important role in our lives.media give us the information about current affairs.but most of news media not work on their fundamental. So I agree with larger extent although some news media have their honesty to talk on main problems.
First of all in this paragraph will introducing the unpleasant site of media in present time news media is not work as a professionals mass media now a days only know about their channel trp.the majority media not give attention on what news they show to public and what it affect on people mind.they only give those news to public which gave them money.
Furthermore It also added news media in this time target relegion, communities and spread negativity about that perticular community.in additional most of media took bribe from poltician.they telecast those news which politician give ordered them.most of media now a days will note say about education, employment or other problems which majorly on our people's occurred.
Alternatively despite the above disadvantages some media have guts to talked about real world.it not target Public this news media have guts to talked about what politician work for public or for their comfort.
To conclude that the mass media now a days fell public in negative ways as the most people also follow them.it worsen for the our future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, so, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03982300885 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67319997764 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.08438775 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.833333333 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264316448278 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153200935949 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313756770087 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158829332446 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267150709661 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.