It is irrefutably that the Internet is a crucial role in human beings lives. Although, the majority of masses believe that newspaper is a good source for learning, yet the contrary side people said that internet is a better source. I explain both views with my own opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
Commencing with the first school people argue that why newspaper significant for their childer learning. First and foremost, it is clear that the newspaper increase communication for education. Since nowadays majority of children away far from global information and they forget own culture compared to the past period. Therefore, it is the best media for the journal development of children. Moreover, in newspaper change daily update world news. Ergo, the newspaper rise of reading and knowledge, who important for children lives.
Furthermore, the other side people believe that the internet is crucial for student learning. Nowadays, it is newly developed in global, due to it is more influence of the student. It is fact despite the interject has more worthwhile in learner life, yet we can not ignore the benefits. In the modern era, in spite of it is a change of lifestyle compared to the past. The more development of the technology, the more opportunities. For instance, enormous pupils depend on the internet, despite the bad impact on children of the thought power.
In conclusion, both Medias have their own importance according to people’s preference. in my opinion, people should active on both sides because sometimes they get the news which is not published by any registered company.
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- The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the total music sold by three different ways between 2011 to 2010 overall it can be seen that the percentage of music sold through download and cds purchased decreased while by stream increased over the g 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18390804598 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83859179563 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6527246845 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.5882352941 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250910343785 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704904487007 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061304033706 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154233706977 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665723244155 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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