There is a conundrum among people about of whether newspaper are the better way to know about the world and obtain information or the internet. I will shed light on both opinions of the aforementioned statement and will further delineates it with plausible reasons followed by reasonable opinion.
Commencing with those who claim that newspaper are the best source to learn information. A predominant reason is that it is useful for grey generation. To explicate it, in this contemporary era , old generation are not familiar with the internet and they do not have much knowledge regarding the electronic gadgets such as laptop, Mobile phones and computers. To epitome, a survey was conducted by reporters in 2016 has revealed that nowadays around 60% of old individuals do not have any information about the internet. As a consequence, newspaper is the only source where senior citizens receive the information and get themselves up-to-date.Moreover, newspaper is also a cheap in price and everyone can purchase it.
As far as I am concerned I advocate in the favor of latter statement, the reason is that getting news online is the fastest and easy source. In other words, in today's time, everyone has a mobile phone and a good internet connection. Through the internet connection people can obtain the news anytime and anywhere with in a second.To exemplify, there are numerous news application are available online which are very elegant among adults and they use it everyday to get news. Therefore, young generation are used more internet and also they help their parents to know about this.In addition, there are a number of other columns such as sports, fashion, entertainment and health related topics are also available under one application.
To recapitulate, I believe that both (newspaper and internet) are better source of information at their own place. Most of the old people read news through newspaper whereas,adults love to read news paper from the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17757009346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00776998752 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1370549629 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258335735807 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929353639645 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821356864904 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166296155804 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683624879448 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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