Essay topics:
some people think that newspaper are the best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that the internet is a better source. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Submitted by Kudrat on Tue, 02/19/2019 - 02:43
Technology has turned the whole world into a small village. Presently, some proportion of masses assert that learning information by reading newspaper is better than other sources. By contrast, others prefer more internet for information. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
Manifold points are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, getting information through newspaper is more cheaper and reliable. For example, unlike internet news, newspaper cost is less and people can get information of their own living area by reading local newspaper while internet confer information related to whole world. Moreover, receiving information through newpaper is easy method for grey generation. To illustrate, old people are unfamiliar with electronic gadgets. They like to read newspaper for information instead of using internet. Apart from it, collecting information with newspaper is lucrative for health. To demonstrate, using internet for information can creates some health issues such as week eyesight, headache and many others. Therefore, newspaper is the fabulous source for getting information. On the other side, others have conflicting views.
To begin with, internet provide audio vedio facility which makes information more effective. To be specific, masses can not only read information through internet but also watch the whole scenario which helps them to understand the information clearly. Furthermore, internet provide wide range of information in distinct fields such as amusement, sports, business where folks can watch according to choice. What is more, people are unable to read newspapers due to hectic schedule so they can read information through internet anywhere anytime. Thus, internet is the outstanding source for searching information.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, both sides have their own significant. However, still I believe that getting information through internet is the need of an hour in this busiest life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Discuss
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Suggestion:
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Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1963.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67341040462 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82180689599 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8082760595 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.347826087 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0434782609 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52173913043 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45666463116 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131994761809 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12927938214 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244848622564 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.290840855525 0.056905535591 511% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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