Nowadays, technology turn entire world into the rulers areas. Some flocks prefer to the newspaper while other think internet is the best way to get information related to any topic. This easy we will discuss both sides and my prospective as well.
To commence with, first and foremost newspaper a good path of information for local area. For instance, newspaper is cheaper instead of others . Newspaper has just writing content and limit news which is printed. Moreover, newspaper publisher after 24 hours and unable to give the quick information.
On the other hand, there are many reasons for supporting my views: first and foremost, internet has vast information about the whole world as well as it provides a lot of information related every field such as economic, polity and geographically so on. For example, internet doing fast work like without seconds and create new relationship with overseas for business as well as it's birth to new friendship. For example, the survey by Hindus times 2020 which depicts 90℅ totally depends upon on internet for their personal internet as well as for business.
To conclude, although newspaper is cost friendly and easy to get anywhere yet internet is the first demand of the entire world for their fundamental needs as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., newspaper is cheaper instead of others . Newspaper has just writing content and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, so, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64836905066 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0663627183 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195565757129 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815362974406 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818923814072 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131424983859 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729125220761 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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