Because of technology indoor games replace outdoor activities. It become negative effects on children health such as mentally as well as physically.
To begin with, in the trending world, pupils choose online games instead of outdoor games like football, cricket so on. There are some reason for that first and foremost, in the urban areas people face space problem and parents prefer to their for using computer to their children for gaming as well as online classes. Secondly, tend to increase crime rate in anywhere because of these situation parents cannot prefer to go out for outside.
On the other hand, despite of some merits of indoor games cannot replace outdoor sports. Outdoor activities beneficial for physical fitness. It helps to maintain obesity and stress relief these activities such as football, tennis so on. Moreover, these games boost children confidence and improve communication skills as well as tolerance as well.
In conclude, although technology plays a crucial role in every field but physically Heath cannot ignore for lastest development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5493689882 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2295806758 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100278246437 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399391976167 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301362882853 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634660320309 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243623111905 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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