In the present day, majority of people use cigarettes as well as different kind of tabacco which is very detrimental effects on their health. Government of every country should ban these type of products which create health issues for human being .It is good step of government.
First and foremost, masses has hobbies of smoking, drinking and other tobacco but it is very harmful for their health such as physically as well as mentally. Secondly, these products has directly effect on their economic conditions because cost of one packet cigarette approximately rupees 2 dollars. Moreover, youngsters use 2 full packet per day which spend hight cost on it.
On the other hand, cigarette and other kind of substances gives more energetic and excitement for human being. Further and even more importantly, it is very harmful for long term because people face different kind of ailments and even death. It creates a lot of health hassle such as cancer, skin problem so on.
In conclude, despite of energy, excitement as well as people feel good for short term whilst major health cannot be ignored as well so government take strong action and mitigate these problems as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01530612245 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55837205989 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1743886738 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151709086003 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634774697483 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388449835677 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094096771511 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374169624406 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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