Some people think that only society should be responsible for any anti-social activities. What are the causes for these activities. Who is responsible for them?
It is true said that" society is like a straw. If you do not stor it up every once in a while then a layer of scum floats to the top" The Given topic asserts that only society is responsibe for activities which are against or not accepted by individual as well as by community. I am totally agreed with statement and shall explain some reason and also tells responsible person for this evil.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason behind this evil is lack of awareness among people. They even do not know the exact reason of this evil. The cause of unawareness is lack of education because as we live in 21st century but there are still many masses who faced in education and that was why most people choose wrong path and disturbed from their path. A good epitome of this could be a survey conducted by Delhi school community, claimed that about 83% of crime held in country due to unawareness about crime among people.
Probing ahead, second cause of this is social media because there are many things in television or in mobile phones which gives a wrong message to youth. Instead, of admiring from their role models they come to know many bad things. They abused their parents even they harm themselves too. For instance, a television actor leave his family alone and commit suicide, and a child also did same in real life and now his parents seem hopeless.
To conclude, I tend to believe that it is responsibility of government to make strict laws to curb up this evil because they are representative of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, then, well, while, for instance, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60507246377 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43144558673 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9255904342 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.916666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139586634521 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430105651236 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455444254903 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795245822605 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559427480094 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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