Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements?
Many individuals think that reducing environmental pollution and also housing problems can be one of the most viable solutions in order to prevent illness and disease. In my opinion, although many diseases that are related to environmental issues can be prevented by reducing pollution, personally housing problems should be considered in a wider view. The aim of this essay is to discuss the argument and it will represent relevant examples.
To begin with, it is important to bear in mind that environmental pollution can have many serious detrimental impacts on the human body. For example, it should be considered that lung cancers are more common amongst people who have been living in the industrial region due to air pollution. Furthermore, even noise pollution can cause adverse effects on people’s health conditions mentally. Consequently, doubtlessly considerable effort should be spent by the authorities in order to provide a better healthy environment to their societies.
Secondly, the lack of housing rights in conjunction with the absence of the other fundamental rights such as accessibility of clean water and paid employment, are able to cause rampant consequence on individuals’ health. The improvement of people's condition should be provided by the government however the sole effort on housing problems can not be beneficial in order to prevent illness. Hence, to create a healthier society, the government should make efforts on the fundamental right of people in a wider view instead of only solving housing problems.
To conclude, many individuals thought that efforts should be made by the government for reducing pollution and housing problem in order to prevent illness and disease. Environmental pollution has the potential to cause an adverse impact on humans health situations nevertheless this essay thought that only solving the housing problem should not be an adequate solution to prevent diseases, therefore it should be dealt with in a larger perspective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47096774194 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05544327567 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4982817565 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348731697209 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139012618626 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892035398365 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228154204047 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601811979434 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.