Some people think that in order to prevent illness and diseases government should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and a housing problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this epoch, it is considered by some people that government must make the efforts for reducing problems such as pollution and housing hinders because diseases and illness can be stopped by it. I am partially agree with this statement because government should provide other things without these which are given by statement. I will explain this points in following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some predominant factors which show that if government take a step for solving the environment and housing problems then illness and diseases can be prevented.Firstly, people do not have good living style. To explicate, I have to face many kind of housing problems such as industry waste, water contamination and more other. For instance, last year, India and other nations were suffering with COVID-19 which was started from China by water contamination and it had become international disease. Thousand people had been died by COVID-19. As a result, government should provide good condition and better quality of life-style to people for stopping the illness and diseases.
On the other hand, government should make another efforts to control in less and disease. Chiefly, Many people prey from some common issues such as a heart problem and obesity are results of unproper diet. To enumerate, These problems could be stopped if government promote health centres for people in their areas. Moreover, government ought to arrange physical teachers at schools who would help to children to aware from illness and diseases.
In conclusion, although government is investing on environment and housing problems, but besides that government should give specific preference to promote health centres and camps which help to prevent illness and diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...n illness and diseases can be prevented.Firstly, people do not have good living style. ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...ing style. To explicate, I have to face many kind of housing problems such as industry wa...
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Message: Use simply: 'a Thousand'.
Suggestion: A Thousand
...nd it had become international disease. Thousand people had been died by COVID-19. As a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38768115942 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77691096536 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1500525589 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349438819432 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118450076941 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852161420133 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21829817769 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902855525934 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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