Some people think that parents have no right to control the lives of their children above 16. Do you agree or disagree with this idea ?
In this day and age, the question of whether parents have the right to control the lives of their children above a certain age is a contentious and multifaceted issue. Some people presume that parents should have limited control as their children grow older. As far as I am concerned, parents play a vital role in shaping their children's lives, but when control becomes excessive, it can have several disadvantages.
To begin with, constant parental control can undermine a child's self-confidence and self-esteem. When children are not allowed to make decisions or take responsibility for their actions, they may doubt their own abilities and become overly reliant on their parents. This can hinder their personal growth and ability to navigate the challenges of adulthood.
Additionally, by constantly intervening and making decisions for their children, parents prevent them from developing essential problem-solving skills. When children are not given the opportunity to face challenges and find solutions on their own, they may struggle to cope with adversity later in life. Learning to overcome obstacles independently is crucial for personal growth and resilience.
Last but not least, excessive control can strain the relationship between parents and their children. When children feel suffocated or micromanaged, they may become resentful or rebellious. This can lead to a breakdown in communication and trust, making it difficult for parents to guide their children effectively.
In summary, while parents have a responsibility to guide and protect their children, excessive control can have detrimental effects. It is important for parents to strike a balance between providing guidance and allowing their children the freedom to make their own choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In this day and age, the question of whether parents have the right to control the l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60966542751 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08175972295 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557620817844 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1150853784 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327839814882 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131977127872 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822528823547 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205041155384 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907320896589 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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