It is true that, in this contemporary era, concentrate is being given on children in a better way by parents. However, number of individuals intropect that all activities of children should be supervised by parents whereas, other masses and according to my perspective, liberty should be given by parents.
To commence with, during childhood they are able to develop their creativity easily and use their potential power to grow themselves in all aspects. Secondly, decision making power can be build by them if parents would give freedom to take their decisions themselves. Additionally, in some aspects like in clothes, education whatever they want to wear or do parents should support them. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that those children are capable to do almost everything and more happy who have freedom instead of those children who have no freedom.
Looking at the other view, parents should also give focus on their children. Moreover, if parents do not concentrate on their children sometimes then bad habbits are started adapting by children like kidnapping, murder, stealing things from people. Secondly, teenagers activities should be closely monitored by parents because in this modern era, they waste their more time in playing games, talking with their friends and so on. Eventually, parents should correct their children mistakes. Thirdly, parents should make some strict rule for their children routine as well. For instance, when I was a child, my parents used to give focus on my activities and if I used to to any mistake then they help me for correcting that. I am very glad that I have supportive parents that is why I have never done any big mistake.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly parents can give attention towards their children for providing better life yet, we must understand that sometimes parents start hurting their children as the name of focus. Furthermore, I personally contemplate that parents should give freedom to their children rather than stopping them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...ve focus on my activities and if I used to to any mistake then they help me for corre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19756838906 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73470435719 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559270516717 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7848106787 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416152756558 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16385780257 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089170327598 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262237235166 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656857907169 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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