Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss boht these views and give your opinion.
It is the fundamental duty of both parents and teachers to help the children evolve into a responsible individual by imparting them a lesson of good behaviour and useful citizen of the community. Some reckon that it is parental responsibility while, other opine that it would learn from school. This esaay sheds spotlight on both views and ends up with my opinion.
On the one hand, the parents are the first teacher of every child. They spend their most of the time with their parents, as a result they can easily teach the basic manners or etiquette. In addition to this, they can also guide them that how to behave in a society and cooperate with the community people. Secondly, juvenile always follow the footsteps of their parents. If the parents or family members behave good with the other people, then it has a great impact on them. It will also help them to learn the things easily and adapt it in their life. Consequently, it will also beneficial to develop the various skills such as communication skills, cooperation, helping nature and many more.
On the other hand, large section of people stick with the veiw that school is the suitable place because of the busy schedule of the parents. Since both parents are working, they are unable to teach them the valuable things. Therefore, they give the whole responsibility of their wards to the professional trainers in the school. The main reason behind this that the well trained tutors are more qualified and the parents think that they can better teach their todlers as comparatively to them. Hence, despite they are matured, they become more agreesive and it leads to weak bonding between patents and children.
To conclude, although the tutors are trained and qualified yet the place of parents are not replaced with anyone else. I believe that it should be the primary responsibility of the parents to teach them.
- There are many different types of music in the world Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays 61
- There are many different types of music in the world Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays 81
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss boht these views and give your opinion 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86645962733 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53766997721 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9622633934 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244419970337 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07769491849 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584223633239 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153512017044 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03575675646 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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