It is believed that parents ought to educate children how to become a benevolent citizen in community. Nevertheless, others say that this task is the responsibility of schools. This essay wholeheartedly agrees that parents shall play a more prominent role. The essay will discuss both points of views.
To most children, parents are their very first role model in life’s milestones. As a matter of fact, a child will behave and imitate as the same way of his parents. Therefore, both father and mother are expected to be equally important exemplars of their own offspring. For instance, according to socialists from Oxford University, numerous persons who are successful in life and career said that the way they thought and reacted to surrounded issues was the result of parental guidance in their childhood.
On the contrary, several individuals think that teachers will perform the mentioned progress better in comparison with parents. However, with the high number of students in class, instructors may find it challenging to ensure their teaching efficiency and struggle to ameliorate it. These days, nuclear families often have merely one to two children, which is a great advantage in empathizing and mentoring their descendants. By the way of illustration, American experts who are specialized in child development show that with the smaller quantity of offspring in a family, the better and more efficient educational quality.
In conclusion, the obligation of teaching children the way to become a civilized citizen should belong to parents due to the certain benefits from being their descendant’s first models and a low number of kids in each family.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ensuring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: ensuring
...ss, instructors may find it challenging to ensure their teaching efficiency and struggle ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, by the way, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3320754717 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96732892343 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618867924528 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9027882323 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.692307692 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169390476203 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589405283063 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418815122735 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10392462862 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521800670214 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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