Whether education should be done by parents or school is up for debate. In this essay, I will consider both sides and conclude by presenting my view.
It is often argued that parental education is vital for children who should learn to be obedient in childhood. One reason for this view is that parents are the guidance to kids towards the correct path. Without their cultivation, youngsters may make mistake without realizing. Another point is parental teaching favours children’s individual development when the brain is well developed. Through tutoring at home, they obtain a concept of the difference between good and bad. They learn to be civility, virtues to be polite. All these promotes personal growth to be a positive citizen in due course.
In contrast, opponents of this view maintain that schools serve as an indispensable role in children’s development, in terms of social learning. The surrounding of huge social groups in school fosters students in learning in a comprehensive way. Teachers take the role to provide proper education in class, which equip students with a sense of public awareness when they take to have teamwork which trains leadership, peer support, and interpersonal communication skills. Such aspects cannot be gained from home, whilst, can be absorbed through groups of people, in order to become a worldly person in future society.
In conclusion, education done by either parents or school is clearly a double-edged sword. However, my view is that school cultivation stands a more favourable point. The reason is that school offers a place for all students to form small networks similar to society where one can build up their interpersonal skills in group discussions, alike that of society, before stepping into the world against all kinds of setbacks to encounter. Therefore, I personally believe that school education should be adopted.
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- Families who do not send their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a comprehensive way" with adverb for "comprehensive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29801324503 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93577735014 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.597100932 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1176470588 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265400041842 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845056919913 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469817576307 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161003748671 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364218345034 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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