Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that those who decide to get a job early and maintain it seems to have a greater job fulfillment than those who regularly change their jobs. Personally, I completely agree with this view.
There are two main advantages associated with job-hopping. One advantage is that people who switch their jobs frequently are more likely to have much experience. The more job opportunities one has tried on, the more experience he/she will get. No job is similar to another, every career or every company has its own benefits and drawbacks. Therefore, some people, especially fresh university graduates - who are willing to get any job offered for the sake of not being unemployed or accumulating experience, choose job-hopping as a practical way to find the job that is most appropriate for them. Furthermore, job-hopping offers people a great opportunity to develop some significant soft skills such as communication skills, teamwork skills, etc. Moreover, experiencing in different types of occupations allow one to communicate with a great amount of people in a variety of contexts and situations, thus help him/her to expand the social circle as well as enhance social skills.
Apart from the advantages of job-hopping expressed above, I believe that staying in the same job has many outweighed benefits. Firstly, it is notable that people who can maintain their jobs are more likely to become specialized in a particular field. People who change their job often can only gain a little amount of knowledge in every field related to their jobs but this knowledge cannot make them to become a specialist in a certain area. As a result, those who stay in the same job for long term stand a better chance for a higher promotion and can be offered a much better salary at workplace due to their specialized experience and commitment. Secondly, staying in the same job enable people to develop a good working relationship with their colleagues, which means that it is much easier to share ideas or to collaborate with those that are trustworthy and supportive. This leads to the fact that the working process will become more productive and less stressful.
In conclusion, although job-hopping has some undeniable benefits, I still strongly believe that people who hold down the same job tend to be more satisfied with their occupation life due to all the reasons I have mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2001.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05303030303 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87692057893 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532828282828 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4206341684 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0625 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311614022355 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110742867775 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857353933393 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222525536366 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581706257338 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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