some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a dream for everyone have a permanent job to fulfill life and stay wealthy. Behalf of this someone argued that find an early job and prolonged stay with that would be better as compared to had a n alternative jobs in between. Searching new jobs after getting one would not be a positive attitude in my perception because, doing one job safely and sincerely will get satisfaction and fearless carrier.
Unemployment and fear of loosing job has been spreading than before. Earlier, people could enjoy works they have choose and put maximum to get better result. Nowadays employees have many opportunities to find and change job as they prefer, while, this perception would affect their works and overall outcome. As a result, such person cannot get a satisfying carrier those who have permanent work. Moreover, interim jobs might not give proper knowledge and ability to concentrate in actual grit to proceed.
On the other hand, irrespective of alternative knowledge, permanent job may produce better life settlement and satisfaction in many ways. Doing same things everyday would exaggerate knowledge deeply and employee can enhance result as much as they can. Such senior employer could teach freshers in terms of in service education and longingly companies establishment.For example, many scientist who works in same field predominantly to discover innovative designs and materials, machines and so on.
Alternative jobs may give different ideas and sources to experiment, not with standing, keeps same work to prolonged years would maximize the benefit than small projects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rolonged stay with that would be better as compared to had a n alternative jobs in...
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Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...that would be better as compared to had a n alternative jobs in between. Searchin...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ier, people could enjoy works they have choose and put maximum to get better result. N...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dge and ability to concentrate in actual grit to proceed. On the other hand, ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...faction in many ways. Doing same things everyday would exaggerate knowledge deeply and e...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...n and longingly companies establishment.For example, many scientist who works in sa...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scientist seems to be countable; consider using: 'many scientists'.
Suggestion: many scientists
...ly companies establishment.For example, many scientist who works in same field predominantly t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32142857143 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84249718547 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2369729104 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190504454635 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675601775486 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327724552965 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10452571991 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426228829456 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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