Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In any type of sports for being successful, strength plays a vital role for any player to play a fantastic game. Some believe that physical strength is the most important aspect for success while others believe that mental strength is more important. I partially agree with above statement that physical strength is more important than mental strength.
To begin with, there are several reasons why physical strength is a major aspect to succeed in sports. Firstly, physical strength gives a player the power to be in the game and showcase techniques. There is not much that a player can achieve by being mentally fit because to win a game players have to run, jump, attack and defend. Secondly, all these activities performed by the body, and without a strong body they cannot continue playing. For example, in a football match, players should be physically fit throughout the match because they have to spend 90 minutes on the field with the ball. For that they need tremendous physical power so that they can play a long stretch.
However, being mentally fit is also important for any sport player’s success because they should be able focus on their game and never loss their sight from the goal. Furthermore, it will only happen when players are mentally fit. For example, in badminton match if a player keep running behind from another player and if he will not prepare himself to make come back one can loss the match even before they finish. If one can make up his mind, he can come back to the game, and may win the game in the end.
In conclusion, although being medically fit is important, but it is not enough to succeed in sporsts as they need a vast physical strength to achieve their set of goals. It is clear with above discussion that for being a successful player, one needs both abilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7476340694 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41193547879 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517350157729 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7287904899 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230334227504 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968182184444 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104283304159 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16933932279 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127002737353 0.056905535591 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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