Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there has commonly been a huge amount of debate with regards to many people argue that the physical activities are preferred for success in sport, however, some of them claim that mental strength is better. The general views when it comes to this subject matter has been a fascinating response from the public, as well as having contradictory opinions. It has split public opinion, with various means being examined and dissected. The main purpose of this essay is to discuss both ends of the coin, also looking into the negative aspects of the essay and discuss them in details.
Some people believe that physical strength creates a breeding ground for ill education and knowledge, hence leading to more serious edification problems such as lack of awareness. Secondly, physical and mental health problems are a major concern, and there has been indisputable scientific evidence clearly indicating a link between bad health and physical strength. Another serious consequence would be the effect this issue has on time and finance. On the whole, physical strength certainly has an influential effect when it comes to time and money concerns.
However, others feel that mental strength is certainly influencing the capabilities of education in general, as it enriches people's knowledge and gives them the freedom to take actions in favour of their community. Secondly, mental strength has a lot of good sides as it is good not only for individuals and families but also for the whole society. Finally, it has a lot of advantages, as it plays a crucial role in improving many sectors in the state or country. Also, it pushes the stability of the whole world forward.
In conclusion, when it comes to this theme, different individuals would suggest a wide range of proposals discussing what needs to be done. Nevertheless, it is rather evident that there are certain ways to go about improving and resolving the issues linked to both strength ability. Overall, it is very clear that, depending on the level of influence and power someone has, it is the responsibility of the governments and civilians alike to help improve the matters at hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07887323944 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73891482775 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557746478873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1199886814 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263003201438 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730318324589 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707945243729 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144264712875 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542567679165 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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