From past to the present, people give attention to the sportive activities. Moreover, they present a lot of sport tournaments and games. Therefore, people has searched the way how they improve themself and being successful in the sport branches. Some of them believe that the most important thing is mental strength while the others supported the idea that physical durability is more helpful. In my opinion, both physical and mental strength are substantial to be good athlete.
First of all, in our day and age especially for sport branches which need to better physical condition like wrestling, sportsmen have to increase their durability. Athletes have countless opportunities to improve their physical condition such as up-to-date training machines, developed health chance, and good coaches. In that ways, almost all sportsman access that opportunities. For that reason, each sportsman needs to the more physical strength to equalize their opponents. To give an example, if an athlete works 2 hours more than his/her rival, it will provide an advantage.
Secondly, support is not just about physical competition. In other words, sportsmen need to use their tactics in the matches. In addition to that they should keep them calm during the competition. For instance, in tennis match, the player who is behind the opponent thinks that he will not win the match. But if he think that the match is not finish yet, maybe he can win. It is about maintaining mentality.
To sum up, being number one in the support, not only physical strength but also mental durability are important. Each player should improve both of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...at he will not win the match. But if he think that the match is not finish yet, maybe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18939393939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71117936922 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6073594436 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1111111111 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313573267318 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772356788273 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075568730195 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166964362561 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113004687775 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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