Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is believed that physical health plays a vital role to achieve success in sport; however, there are people convinced that mental health is the crucial key. I would argue that physical strength is a key to great achievement.
On the one hand, mental attitudes are certainly important while playing sports. First of all, stabilize mental condition boosts a person's confidence and the ability to concentrate to a certain point. Likewise, the players would have great performance and never lose sight in the middle of the competition. Moreover, if the athletes or players ever experienced failure, with mental strength, they would be able to get through anxiety or stress disorder.
On the other hand, from my perspective, having a strong physical helps to combat other opponents. A healthy body with muscles is a basic requirement to sports players, For example, improving your body count, increase lung endurance will lead to a better repercussion than the one who does not work out. Furthermore, exercising daily helps humans healthier, avoid diseases such as high blood pressure, heart attack, or obesity.
In conclusion, maintain both your mental and physical health is crucial when you are playing sports but you should pay more attention to your body condition.
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- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24157303371 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77271523129 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719101123596 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9916657984 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1958401247 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692902657074 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518912287536 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119559995615 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444193378535 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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